Food Blog Draft

 


2 thoughts on “Food Blog Draft

  1. I love that you are sticking to your theme of food! Your passion and enthusiasm for the topic definitely shows in your audio story. Overall, I think your draft is very informative. One of the things I enjoy about the podcasts I listen to is how the host shares their opinions and relates it back to how it affects those around them or even them personally. I think you did a good job doing that here. One thing I would recommend for your final story is to cut out any static. There is a lot of muffled noise leading up to your intro. I did notice when I was recording audio on my cell phone there was a lot of static, making my material hard to hear. I would also love to read any additional research or your editing process! I am trying to pick up on as much as I can and glean tips from colleagues. Look forward to hearing your final story!

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  2. Self Critique

    I think after hearing everyone’s audio, I would most definitely add music or some sort of sound effects. It’s amazing how much of a difference it makes. I specifically want to use something that relates to dining and don’t know which direction to go in just yet. At first I didn’t think of interviewing someone but now that I think about it I feel as though it’ll add a new element to my audio and also give my listeners another perspective other than mine. I like the fact of introducing the interviewer after I’ve let my audience know about the subject, similar to what NPR does. Although I didn’t use a lot of cutting, I feel like I could piece things together more coherently so that the flow of the audio makes for an easier listen. I’m honestly excited to get back to this project as I feel I have so many improvements to make and can’t wait for my finished piece.

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